James was alone. He have nothing without his job, one day he was gone in a big park to do some rest and see the beautiful plants. James saw a girl who was doing the same thing like James looking beautiful plants James goes to him and say excuse me are you security guard she said no I am just a girl who loves helping nature, James asked what is your name she said Aqusha and she also asked she what are you doing here James says I am just looking at the beautiful nature and doing some rest in the middle of them. They started talking with each other. They always come to the garden talk and Everyday they meet at the same place. One day they walked so much they forgot their way back . They got two ways they use the way 1 and started walking. In some minutes they saw a world of magic they got an entrance Aqusha said let me check and Aqusha goes in there and teleported back to where she lives James got shocked and James got teleport his home was. In which home he was not giving the rent. The Owner was with him and then Owner says you can live here for free James got shocked and go out of the house and saw everyone was helping the plants, trees giving them water sunshine. James was shocked and says I am in another world…….
James was in another world in this world people don’t use money or dollar here you have to do the work that the shopkeeper says there is no money in here, Just work for everything even for water. In here, people don’t give tax to the government, the government gives money to people but nothing is gonna happen because the shopkeepers or anyone do not take money but here one thing comes from money and it is money. James was an old man that’s why he cannot do such things. So James decided to go back to the garden where Aqusha got trapped and he come to another world.When he goes there and see, there was nothing no garden just a museum when he goes in the museum he teleport to a place and saw that he is in the Field of flames, people holding flames and praying to God. I know who do prayer from flames but this is another world there are no candle here there are flames here but James was teleport here and there. After 12 teleportation he goes to the garden the garden which teleport him in another world.He goes out of the garden But there was nothing like buildings or any thing a stranger comes James tells his story to the Stranger who was just walking here and there the stranger say you are stupid and go far from me and after he says the words to James. James and Aqusha got died that was a magic or anything, James got a heart attack and Aqusha die by an accident. They two got die when James asked a Stranger the stranger gives the answer and they die it is so bad for a good guy who didn't even do something wrong. THE END.
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